Title: IELTS Writing 1: Formal report describing how tea is made (165 words)

Tea is a popular drinking of almost people in the world. It is the agricultural product of the camellia sinensis plant’s leaves. This report will describe how tee is made.

There are several stages to make tea. First, freshest leaves of camellia sinensis plant are plucked by hands from the farm.  Then they are spread on the shelves in 18 to 24 hours and they are withered. Before being fermented on the shelves in a haft to 5 hours, the leaves are fed into rolling machine in 2 to 3 hours so that all juices are released. Afterwards, they are put in ovens on trays and they are dried in 30 to 40 minutes. In the next stage, dry leaves are cut, sifted, sorted and graded. In the final stage, the tea is tasted by the buyers and auctioned to get highest price. After that, they are packed in to the tea chests and exported. Then the tea is packed again in to small packets.


Rewrite:

Tea is the most widely consumed beverage in the world. It is an agricultural product of the camellia sinensis plant’s leaves. This report will describe how tea is made.

There are several stages to make tea. First, the freshest leaves of camellia sinensis plant are plucked by hand from the farm.  Then they are spread on the shelves for 18 to 24 hours and they are withered. Before being fermented on the shelves for  half an hour to five hours, the leaves are fed into rolling machine for two to three hours so that all juices are released. Afterwards, they are put in ovens on trays and they are dried during 30 or 40 minutes. In the next stage, dried leaves are cut, sifted, sorted and graded at the same time. After that, the tea is tasted by buyers and auctioned to get the highest price. In the final stage, they are packed in to the tea chests and exported. Then in importing countries, the tea is packed again into small packets.

Vocabulary story 1

Playing football is my greet passion. Therefore, I often play football every weekend with my coworker. It makes me more optimistic about my job, my life. Sometime, when I resent something, I usually play sport in order to refrain from the situation that I feel desperate.

The 1st assigment of AE 5

The tourists will come to Perth city, Australia on June, 1^st and live there in three days. Therefore, it is important to compare and contrast hostels in order to make a right choice of hostel for living. This essay will compare and contrast three hostels: Ocean Beach Backpackers, Britannia on William and The Old Swan Barracks hostel in respect of convenience of location, facilities and price.

          The convenience of hostels’ location differences considerably. Of the three hostels, Britannia on William hostel is the most convenient since it is located near the center if Perth, with take one minute from the city. The Old Swan Barracks hostel is located opposite WA museum, which two minutes away from the train and bus station while Ocean Beach Backpackers hostel is located near Cottesloe Beach which is a good place for sun bathe and an fantastic views in Indian Ocean.

          There are both similarities and differences between the hostels regarding facilities. Both three hostels have variety of entertainment facilities such as TV lounges, movie room and internet. In addition, each of them also has the self-catering facilities where service cafe, breakfast and restaurant. The Old Swan Barracks hostel has free for breakfast while Britannia on William hostel has free for line and 24 hot showers. In contrast, Ocean Beach Backpackers hostel service surfboard and body board free.

          Each hostel differs with respect price. Ocean Beach Backpackers hostel is the most expensive with 29.86 EUR for one person per three night and 23,89 EUR for share. Britannia on William hostel is moderate with 26,96 EUR for private and 22,4 EUR for share while The Old Swan Barracks hostel is the cheapest  with only 20,90 EUR for private and 17,17 EUR for share.

          In conclusion,  all hostel have their particular benefits. Ocean Beach Backpackers hostel have good convenient of beach facilities but its price is the most expensive and it is not located near the center of Perth city. The Old Swan Barracks hostel is the cheapest price but it locates far from the city. Britannia on William hostel is located near the center of Perth city and it has a moderate price. Therefore, it perhaps the best choice for visitor to live when visiting or working in the Perth city.

A work-life balance person

It will not good for person who works or learn in a long time per day. If we have a work-life balance, we will have more time for other social activities.  In addition, it is better if when we do something, we persevere with it. This may be helps us to accelerate our works and we can get the successful result more easily. Then we could be superior to other people and make they admire us more. Another advice for you is that when your works are disrupted by some reasons, be confident to overcome it.

 Questions:

1. What should you do to have time for your social activities?
2. What should you do  to get a success?
3. Is your work be accelerated when you persevere with it?
4. Are you superior other people?

5. What will you do when something disrupt your work?
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Working or learning in a long time per day is not good for you. So that you should have a work-life balance in order to having time for your social activities. In addition, when you do something, you should persevere with  it. Affer that, you will get a sucessful result for yourseft. Moreover, you will superior to others people and they will envious of your success. If something disrupts your work, be confident to overcome it.

Questions:

1. What should you do to have time for your social activities?
2. What should you do with your work to get a success?
3. What will you do to others people?
4. How do others people feel with your success?
5. What will you do when something disrupt your work?